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mommytobe3421
03-02-2008, 09:46 AM
I dont know if its just my hormones but this made me cry lol

Sweet Goodbye

He wore his sunglasses on that day
To hide his tear-filled eyes.
I knew that underneath that mask
Were a soldier's silent cries.

He stands tall now.
He’s strong and proud,
But when goodbye was near,
He kissed my head and touched my face
As I begged, “Please, my love, stay here.”

He spoke softly to his son
And finally broke down.
When his tiny baby squealed,
It made the sweetest sound.

“Now, you be good for your mom,”
He ordered his son through tears.
“She’s gonna tell me when you’re bad,
So you be good for her, you hear?”

The baby smiled as if to agree.
My soldier said, “I’ll be home soon.
I love you Little Man,” and then he looked at me
And said “I love you too.”

The time is here, and I have to go.
I’ll call you when I’m there.
Here’s my ring, the keys, and some money
To pay the parking fare.

Time will fly. You will see.
I’ll be home when the year is new.
“I love you,” he said as he walked away,
And I cried, “I love you too."
By Cathryn A. Chandler

Missing Pokey 17
03-04-2008, 07:55 PM
:tears:tears

lovingamarine07
03-04-2008, 07:59 PM
omg... i dont have kids but that got me bad... that is precious! thank you for sharing!

jacksonsvw83
03-04-2008, 07:59 PM
Made my heart do something funny. I think it sunk. Beautiful and very accurate

luvmysgt
03-21-2008, 08:58 AM
Aww thanks for sharing.. We have 3 kids all together and soon off to deployment right around the corner.. Im at work but if I was at home I would for sure cry..

Cassaundra
03-21-2008, 09:01 AM
freakin' A!! and i was doing so good.....:tears :tears

RunAwayLove
03-21-2008, 09:02 AM
wow awesome

mommytobe3421
03-21-2008, 09:50 AM
okay so it wasnt my hormones lol it made u guys cry also lol

marinegirl85
03-21-2008, 03:53 PM
that was so sweet. so sad

proudofmysailor
03-21-2008, 03:59 PM
:tears That hit hard! Thank you for sharing it with us!

HanlonsGirl828
03-21-2008, 04:07 PM
awwww it made me cry too! It reminds me of when my dad used to leave for deployment it was always sucha sad time. I'm not looking forward to it at all with DB!!! :depressed

soldiersangel
03-25-2008, 05:51 PM
Aw, I dont have kids but that hit really hard. :depressed It made me cry too.

kissfromarose586
03-25-2008, 07:23 PM
That made me tear up :sadeyes

bug
03-25-2008, 08:25 PM
Wow that just knocked me on my ass...I thought I was doing ok today too -- good poem.

letgo0527
03-25-2008, 11:13 PM
:tears

Soldierslove08
03-25-2008, 11:20 PM
Oh yeah had some tears on that one. SOOOO sweet!

aelsass
03-26-2008, 12:02 AM
very beautiful. Thanks.